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©2009 *Dolore
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Model: Anneli Kalander

© Copyright Tonje Thilesen 2009

Critiques


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Something about this piece really excites me. I admit, I am biased because my favorite color is purple, yet it is obviously more than just that. I really enjoy how this photograph is composed, with the arms moving out of the frame. It helps to bring your attention around the photograph. The detail in the eyes, eyelashes and scarf are fantastic, though i think this detail/contrast may have effected the skin tone in a negative way. Where the skin fades into the shadow there seems to be this heightened texture which is a little unappealing to me, and since the face is the focus it stands out. Another note about skin that is bothering me is the shadows on the arms. I am not sure if it is from reflections of purple or something else, but the shadows on her arms are very cool, and , especially on her right arm, look like bruising. This are the only this that really concern me in this photograph. I love the color vibrancy you've achieved. Great choice of a model. Great photograph! -Steven
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:iconmarys87:
wonerful girl!

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:icondilemmanya:
its so nice shot friend :clap:
:iconkaila-vs-art:
great photograph

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:iconmadamsuizid:
great colours and a beautiful model.
i'm not a fan of this lightning - but dont mind ;)

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:icondolore:
Thanks!

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:icondolore:
Thank you!

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:icondolore:
Thanks. Of what in this type of lighting is it that you do not like?

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:iconmadamsuizid:
in my opinion its too much light in her face - its too bright on one point: the right side of her face.

even its a fantastic photo with a great pose, a beautiful model, awesome accessorys and stuff, but i would love to see how this photo would look, if her face isnt that kind of "exposed".

hope you understand what i mean :| :)

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Yeah, I'm aware of it myself. It is mostly a result of the post-processing though, which I clearly didn't take too seriously in this photo. D:

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Mar 31, 2009, 7:45:03 PM

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